Hakimuddin Radhanpurwala Week 12- Toy Soldiers
The following piece explores the overlooked dimensions of power in America. As the seamless notion of power in society plays the perpetrator of all wrongdoings, it also encapsulates the potential to uplift marginalized voices and spread the notion of hope around the world. Power is what we make of it—its sole purpose is not to define greatness in itself, but rather the perseverance observed despite each of our fallibilities. Inspired by Allen Ginsberg's "America," the piece itself is a stark portrayal of protest poetry and power found through advocacy, while the content portrayed criticizes the corrupt misuse of power in a political context.
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“America HAHAHA—is what the fat-green chicks dressed in suits laugh when
they push the red button.
America BOOM—is what the Nobody's hear on daily news-papers pressed to their ears.
America F*CK YOU—is what every other country cries when we shuttle a bloody strike
because we love to hiroshima every other sunday and alternate with nagasaki for leisure.
America YOUR WIGS ON FIRE—is what we recite because we’re genuinely scared that
the orange fungus growing on your thick skull might be the inevitable doom in place
for us all.
America GOOD KITTEN—is what the soviets chant when Putin pets our fur and sends
his fleas to get in bed with a 31 year-old Nato-baby; why don’t we steer clear of Vladimir?
I thought our premise was to set a masculine precedent and yet we let a cold-war waging
white man jerk our whiskers? Gosh, I didn’t reckon the taste of our country to
be governed by a band of candy-striped rookies.
America I’LL BE YOUR MASCOT—is what I’d never say, because who am I kidding,
once my white face-paint melts, I’ll feel my brown skin burn; my naked flesh dissolving
in a stampede of suited white whippersnappers, while the fluorescence of my skin will
camouflage with the dirt they walk upon.
American YOU WH*RE—is what your wife tells me every now and then in bed,
you swapped condoms for qualms with Iraq’s husband—Saddam—and unprotected
sex gave birth to that brutal b*tch ISIS, you mingled civilly with Syria, you went down on
Yemen and forgot to feed the poor girl a breakfast, I didn’t think you fancied Latinas but
when I heard you cockblocked Venezuela from her suitors I sent my condolences, and
then the only thing I learned is-real to you is your wife; don’t worry I didn’t do bad with
mom—she was just telling hoary bedtime stories of a man breathing liberty whom she met
on a metro running six-days in 1967; she said you were a kind and courageous man,
ambitious to the bone, but when I called your name I heard: Daddy’s never coming home
America TRUFFULA TREES—is what we lack (and what the dead once had); maybe
when you find the Lorax we can all come back.
America [ ]—is nothing; we don’t speak about it anymore; it’s a thing of past; look
around, there’s not much word we have left; after my shift clocks out, I’ll catch Uncle Sam by
the dirt and we’ll both dig ditches a million feet deep, and the last word they’ll hear
of you and me is:
Rest in Peace”
Hi Hakim! Once again, your blog is very thought provoking and engaging. I really appreciated your unique formatting style, and repetition to describe different statements towards America, such as “America GOOD KITTEN.” It added a layer of complexity and made your writing very interesting to read. Your content was also extremely thought provoking and engaging. The vivid descriptions and figurative language you used to describe America’s political decisions and declining state was impactful, and made me think more about the consequences of the actions of this country. Your explicit language following “America” at the start of each paragraph also added another surprise element, and showed your unique artistic writing style. Your diction was also very complex, and reflected the multifaceted nature of the country well. Your ending was also very impactful, and left me thinking about what the future of the country might look like. Overall, your blog was very unique and thought-provoking, and I really enjoyed reading it!
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